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redo of 'summer camp memories'
© 2008 pweb

Second look at framing - cropped some off of both sides for less "extra" space. Better?
My daughter revisits scene of summer camp, 10 years ago.
Hidden Villa, Los Altos Hills, CA.

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Date: Wed Jan 16, 2008
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Keywords: redo of summer camp memories
Camera: Canon PowerShot SD850 IS / IXUS 950

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I like your image a lot Pam. Love the colors and the great S curve of the path. My only nit here is If you had let your human subject get a little farther down the path I think it would have avoided her being dead center and added a bit more balance to the overall composition.

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#1 Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:24am

davidis

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nicely Pam!

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#2 Thu Jan 17, 2008 9:51am

pweb

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This was a case of grabbing it quickly before the moment is gone, as so many are with unposed human subjects. She's slightly less centered in this version -- cropping more of the foreground is the next step. IMHO, the original image is just the starting point...

-Pam :idea:
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#3 Thu Jan 17, 2008 9:58am

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