I love the flowers in this image...especially when viewed full size, lots of detail and texture...but there are some problems.
The image is too busy. The two flowers put my eyes in a tug of war. If they had some interaction, I could see doing this, but with the balance you have here, I can't find a solid subject.
The lighting is harsh and and all the other dark leaves and buds are in focus, yet too dark. If they are going to be dark, like that, you need a short DOF to put them out of focus and create a smooth background. This is a great situation for using a diffuse reflector to help smooth out the harsh light.
Since you have a high res image, experiement with various croppings, isolating one flower and see how that moves you. I think that will really improve this image.
Rich
