Another version with a slightly different perspective.
D E R A I L produced some great ideas from PR members.Here is one of those ideas with a twist. :O)
I framed this to include the fast track on the right.

D E R A I L was shot ten minutes prior to this version.
A 3 second shutter was selected for this exposure,followed by crop the horizon. Here is the final result.
Improvement? :O)
Thanks for all the previous tips and suggestions.