This photo has a lot going for it. The only real problem I can see is a lack of any real subject. You need to do this again with a model. IMO. I would do it as a nude. You could really create quite a provocative image that way.
BTW that has to my first tripod mounted handgun. Nice touch.
John Cowan
Always do sober what you said you'd do drunk. That will teach you to keep your mouth shut.
~Ernest Hemingway~
