The crop feels weird to me - all that empty space on the right. But I love the double window action. And I agree with almo that there is a powerful sense of failure and sad history.
Photo-John
I wasn't exactly sure what to do with the crop. I didn't want the window dead center. Mabye I should just crop it tighter? Thanks!
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I know what you mean about not having the window too centered. But in this case I think it would be fine. The first window acts literally, as a window. I don't think you have to worry about it as a compositional element that needs to follow the Rule of Thirds. It's what's inside the window that really defines the composition. I do think you should keep some of the wall for character and texture, though.
Photo-John
