I like the idea of using software to create collages. But you have to do it very carefully. It's not enough to just put different things together in the same image. You have to do it very carefully. In this case, I'm not getting the meaning of the piece and I find it too busy. Maybe you could work on it and refine it so that it speaks to the viewer better. Ask yourself what you want it to say. Be specific and make a list, on paper. Then go back and look at it again and see for yourself how well it's communicating your thoughts, ideas, and feelings. Art is hard to create. I like whwre you're headed. But I think you're just getting started. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Photo-John
