This is an interesting conspet, but with a guy I am not sure it works. This crop is just all wrong for a man. Why would you cut it off like that? Are you afraid to post the whole thing?
Also you have some exposure problems as well. When you shoot a person in a situation like this you need to meter for the skin. Here your are overexposed a bit for the skin. I would try this again woth either a better crop, or the entire body. And the orintation really isn't working either, I would just stay true to the fact that he laying down.
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