This would be an exceptional image if it were not for the lower third of the background. I think that it is the wall and the water. The grass would work on its own I think. The shadow in the bottom right hand corner is a bit distracting as well, but that is something that could be removed in post.
John Cowan
Always do sober what you said you'd do drunk. That will teach you to keep your mouth shut.
~Ernest Hemingway~
