Miss Marlyn-
This is pretty - except for that time code. Turn that off! It only ruins photos.
I like that you left a sliver of the foreground in this image. For me, that makes all the difference in the world. Most of the time I just can't relate to a photo of nothing but sky. The ground - well - it grounds the photo. In this case, I wish you'd left a little more. I also would have cropped some more off the top to make it more rectangular. That would have elimiminated some of the darker clouds at the top, which I feel are a little repetitious. It would also lengthen the image and give it more of a "horizon"tal feel :-)
Hope my comments arre useful to you. Thanks for sharing!
Photo-John
I have to agree with John on this one. I like the photo but the sliver of foreground looks like it would have been much more interesting than the expanse of darker cloud at the top of the photo. Points awarded for including it at all though!
