This image has a lot of possibilities. It's a little off center to be as effective as it could be.
If a vanishing point effect was the idea it chops off a little soon, else it goes to far.
Just a few feet further back from the face of the building would dramatically alter the whole effect (don't get in the middle of traffic as I've been known to do!) and perhaps tie the top of the photo 'off'.
Good sky and more reflection of same would really enhance this concept.
