Interesting subject.Choosing a different camera angle would have improved this tremendously as the sky is blown out, distracts
Also I feel the AF metering was confused by the high contrasting light,narrow DOF as a result the image is overexposed,soft due to the 3.5 F/stop. Hope this helps.:thumbsup:
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thanks for your comments i am new to this please post your edit
thanks
MartynTo me, The goal is to move people, to make people think, but never, never at the expense of the person you're photographing. To laugh with, yes - but never to laugh at. -Lord Snowdon
Martyn
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